My First Song

Share and discuss your LMMS music projects here, and see what people think!
Would love feedback on this.

Thank you :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiLGN-mbFbg
obnoxify wrote:
Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:13 pm
Would love feedback on this.

Thank you :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiLGN-mbFbg
Alright! Rad beat dude!

Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Its powerful,

Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
brandystarbrite wrote:
Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:21 am
obnoxify wrote:
Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:13 pm
Would love feedback on this.

Thank you :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiLGN-mbFbg
Alright! Rad beat dude!

Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you :). What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
The intro makes me feel so C H I L L
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Incorruptable wrote:
Wed Jul 17, 2019 11:30 am
Its powerful,

Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
Yep, on point. I'm the outcast lmao
Anonymouqs wrote:
Sat Jul 20, 2019 6:14 pm
The intro makes me feel so C H I L L
ayy.
DJB wrote:
Sat Jul 20, 2019 7:17 pm
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Ty. Will do that. Just getting into mixing so feedback is really appreciated :D
obnoxify wrote:
Sat Jul 20, 2019 1:52 pm
brandystarbrite wrote:
Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:21 am
obnoxify wrote:
Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:13 pm
Would love feedback on this.

Thank you :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qiLGN-mbFbg
Alright! Rad beat dude!

Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you :). What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
Try using one of lmms' equalizer plugins on the vocals.
Play around with the dials, and turn the dials anyway you want, until the vocals sound nice, clearer, and punchy enough for your style.

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