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My first song with LMMS

Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2019 4:13 pm
by amicusomnibus
Hello!
I've been using LMMS for a few months now and I decided I want to start making EDM with it. This is far from that, but I think it's good for a start. :)
Feedback would be appreciated. Thank you all.
https://youtu.be/wXeV4cc8UFA

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2019 8:09 pm
by northivanastan
This is good for a first song. I like the instrumentation, and I notice you using a number of features I didn't know about when making my first song.

My main criticism is that it doesn't stand out very well compared to other EDM music, and the drums could be more impactful.

Anyway, welcome to the forum and I hope you continue to enjoy making music.

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2019 3:14 am
by brandystarbrite
amicusomnibus wrote:
Sat Feb 23, 2019 4:13 pm
Hello!
I've been using LMMS for a few months now and I decided I want to start making EDM with it. This is far from that, but I think it's good for a start. :)
Feedback would be appreciated. Thank you all.
https://youtu.be/wXeV4cc8UFA
This sounds superb. And the melodies are really lovely.

Tips: This tune needs a good bit, of volume balancing.
Because, some of the sounds and melodies in this track, need to stand out a bit more,
and sound a bit more stronger, because they sound too soft, and a bit dulled down in some places.

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2019 5:35 pm
by Rakso
Great for a first song! Some individual drums are occasionally a bit harsh (like right before the drop at about 1:52). Also the drop lacks power (the lead could be more powerful). But a nice and uplifting tune and quite a clean mix :)

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Sun Mar 24, 2019 11:36 am
by amicusomnibus
Thank you all for the feedback! I know it's been like a month or so but I've been busy.
I did listen to the advice. I'm posting a new song now which sounds a bit better in my opinion but I can always work on my music to make it better. :)

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2019 6:34 am
by Luca3715
Nice for a first song. Music is very good...
Awsome....

Re: My first song with LMMS

Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2019 3:32 am
by brandystarbrite
amicusomnibus wrote:
Sun Mar 24, 2019 11:36 am
I'm posting a new song now which sounds a bit better in my opinion but I can always work on my music to make it better. :)
That's good. Working hard to improve your music, is very nice.